In this blog assignment we had to write about a time where you had to make an important life choice. We have to incorporate showing and telling writing, to give readers an understanding of the story and how I felt about my situation. But before we could begin, it was necessary to watch a YouTube video called Reflective Writing. This video talks about the three stage process that involves looking back, analyzing, and projecting into the future. They mention the critical questions you should ask yourself while writing, what to avoid writing about, and the benefits you receive like a boost in self confidence. I will be responding to a handful of questions related to my writing process as well.
Who did you work with to compose your life-choice memoir? Was this a good approach? I was unsure of what to write about initially for this particular assignment. I haven't experienced many tough life choices, where I had to choose a certain path. But once I sorted through my memories, I picked a topic to write about. I talked to my Mom about the situation and she helped me gain some clarity. I also discussed it with my older sister and by doing that, she validated my feelings. She aided in the process of simply understanding, being supportive of my decision, and giving structure to my story. I feel as though this was a good and positive approach because my Mom played a role in my story, and my sister is the person I often open up to and feel most comfortable around. What rhetorical mode and genre are you using? The rhetorical mode for my life choice memoir is a narrative and the genre I am using is creative nonfiction. When did you write this project? Good approach? I began writing this project probably about a week after it was assigned to the class. I struggled with finding a situation that was "high stakes" or major. I debated between the story I chose to speak about and another one. But, since this is reflective writing I ended up going with the more personal narrative. I think it was a good approach because even though I didn't know what to write about from the beginning I bounced my ideas back and forth. I didn't settle until I was content with my topic, feelings, and understanding the entire circumstance. Where did you write this project? Good approach? I originally attempted to write this project in class, but I was having trouble trying to pick a real life situation that was difficult for me on a bigger scale. So, I ended up writing this project at home in my bedroom. I think it was a good approach, because I was comfortable when writing this story so when I needed to go into detail I found it was much easier. I could think clearly, and visualize the past and everything that took place. Why did you choose to write about your chosen topic? Good choice? I chose to write about this topic because it was difficult for me and other family members. I think it's also very relatable in the fact that relationships end all the time, whether we want them to or not. Sometimes it's in your best interest to terminate a relationship with someone, especially when you know it's unfixable and not in your control. I think it's a good choice because for me personally, it was a tough and long-drawn-out issue that I ignored and never spoke about. I also believe it was a good and healthy option because it assisted in me reflecting back on the situation, my emotions, and my overall decision. How did it feel to write this narrative ("during, after, and since")? Do you have any "if only" moments that can help you revise the draft? While I was writing this narrative it was strange and definitely not easy. I was experiencing frustration towards the person I spoke about and as a result, my fingers did not want to stay on the keyboard but my anger sure did. I would go from writing at a speed of zero words per minute, to nearly fifty words per minute. It was a constant back and forth battle. After I was finished writing I was satisfied to get my thoughts and inner perspective into the world, which I very often shelter. Ever since I wrote my narrative I think about it more, but not in a negative way. I tend to remember the situation, and it's unfortunate but I'm confident and at peace with my decision. As of now, I do not have any "if only" moments that can help revise my draft, but if any occur I will use them to improve my writing. How will you revise your narrative? I revised my narrative multiple times through my drafts, and by critiquing my own work. I used helpful tips that the YouTube video mentioned and explained, and I also took inspiration from everything we learned in class. *UPDATED* In class we were to share our life-choice memoirs out loud during our last two classes. When I was listening to their meaningful pieces of writing and they were expressing raw emotion, it changed my mind. I reverted back to my original story that I wrote, which I felt very strongly about. I'm glad we had the group readings because if we hadn't, I would have stuck to my story called No Prescription. It made me want to open up and share a story that I was hesitant about. I thoroughly enjoyed both of my stories, but I did come to the conclusion that my story In Bloom held a deeper meaning. If my classmates could share their personal truths, so could I.
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